My Writing Test

IALT: use academic language in my writing.

Before the writing test we went over the basics of an explanation text. Scrolling down to start of the test I was getting more and more nervous and once I got there I stopped. I thought about how I wanted to start for a good 5 minutes, the subject was about friends and how to be a good friend. Here is a sneak peak... A true friend is someone who can hear when you're quiet. 

The most challenging part of this test for me was the fact that I couldn't think of a way to start because I was getting worried that I wouldn't be able to finish but in the end I was able to get there. I feel that I gave the test my all and I thank Ms Komor for the things she has taught me. She is truly one of the greatest teachers ever. Thank you all for reading this blogpost of mine about my writing test. Much Love to you all. Metui.

Writing Reflection

WALT: craft a explanation text on my own.

My writing task for this week is to craft a explanation text independently and in my opinion I am doing great. With the help of my friends I think that I have made a great introduction and first paragraph, here is a sneak peek. (I also learn a lot of things like why I was sent here.

Church has also helped me improve my spiritual life and it has also strengthened my beliefs.)

The most challenging part of making this paragraph was putting it into a sentence.

I knew what I was talking about but I just didn't know how to put into words but with the help of my friend Aumau I got there in the end. I am proud of what I got so far and I know if I stay focused I can make it even better.

My next step is to work on making the rest of my text to pull my audience in so they can really understand why I am explaining this.

Thank you for reading my reflection. Leave a comment about how church improved your life. Much love to you all.

Metui

What Are You Grateful For?

WALT: use our free time to write about subjects to improve our writing skills

In this DLO I have explained what I am grateful for and why and the three things were my family, church and music and sport. I am grateful for many things but these were the main three that came to mind. My favourite on this list is sport because of the things sport has done to get me maned up for college and the real world. Leave a comment of what you're grateful for, thank you for reading and much love to you all.

Metui

Kiwi Kids News: Is Sports Sexist??

WALT read a text and summarise it into our own words
In this DLO I have reflected on a Kiwi Kids News this article is about sport being
sexist towards women.I went through the questions and answers them to the best
of my abilities. Click here for the link to the article.Thank you so much for reading, much love.
Metui

Animal Alphabet

Brushing your Teeth

Metui

Brushing your Teeth

Have you brushed your teeth lately, well if you haven't then get up and i’ll show you how to do it in the right way.Remember if you haven't brushed you your teeth ever then this is a good tutorial for you .

First you grab your toothbrush if you don't have one they sell it at supermarket and other places and make sure you’ve got toothpaste.Then after you got all that you are set to start.After you got all the stuff then you are ready.

To Start off you need to rinse your toothbrush this is because it either might be dried or to soften it.After that put some toothpaste on your toothbrush and then you start brushing your teeth.

Make sure you brush you teeth two times to make sure that it is shining and brush your tongue to give you fresh breath.After that when you finish you can put some water

My Writing Rubric

Ideas:

I gave myself a:	Because:
R3	At least 3 ideas about a topic

Structure and Language:

I gave myself a:	Because:
r3	I can write a beginning, middle and end in my writing

Organisation:

I gave myself a:	Because:
R5	I can use paragraphs.

Punctuation:

I gave myself a:	Because:
R5	I always use correct punctuation for my sentences.

Sentence Structure:

I gave myself a:	Because:
r3	I can write long and short sentences that make sense.

Vocabulary:

I gave myself a:	Because:
r3	I use adjectives and verbs in my writing.

Spelling

I gave myself a:	Because:
r6	I can spell almost all words correctly.